Did you ever feel the snow fall down on your face?
Crunch under your feet when you walk.
Did you ever taste the hot chocolate?
Steamy and refreshing.
Did you ever see the snowmen?
5 feet tall getting buried in snow.
Did you ever hear the snow blower?
Blowing the sidewalk off so you can get out.
Very Snowy Dawg.
ReplyDeletei think this is a great poem but what would make it better is to put spaces between each thought like have the "did you ever" and then all the supporting details that go with it then press return twice and start your new thought :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Corteney...but it's super good, buddy!!!
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